FanFiction/Stories Rating Thread!

[Dasthur]

Hello, everyone, this thread is for rating and talking about your fellow members' FanFictions/Stories.

NO OTHER TALK IS ALLOWED.
If you talk about anything else, then your post will be deleted, and you will be given a warning, any other posts not about others' FanFiction, will end up in a possible ban.

Now then. Onto Exodius's new FanFiction. I'll give Chapter One, a 9/10. Great writing, but it gets a bit boring in the end, other then that, it's great. Can't wait for Chapter Two. (Hopefully today )

[Exodius]

Now that you have rated my Story, Dasthur, I suppose it is time for yours to be rated. I would personally give it a 8.5/10. I like it because you immediately started with the story's action, but it was a tad short. Just some constructive advice, Dasthur; When a character speaks, their lines must be seperated. Sort of like below, for example;

"Hi, Bob."
"Hiya."

That is just an example. Take that up, and your story will most likely be a 9 should I rate it again! That is all.

[Katsuro]

I'd give it a 9.9/10 because...It was short.

[Dasthur]

I'd give it a 9.9/10 because...It was short.

Mine or Exodius's?

[Exodius]

Presumably you, my friend.

[Katsuro]

Chapter three of 'The 99 Nights' was pretty uber. 10/10

[Dasthur]

Thank you, Katsuro.

And Exodius, that chapter was awesome, great way to go into Action, then back to regular dialogue. 10/10.

[Katsuro]

Exodius, your fanfiction was filled with pure awesomeness! 10/10

[Exodius]

It's more of a lone story, actually, Falcon, since it doesn't actually incorporate things from AQW.

Anywho, Dasthur, I give your latest Chapter of your FanFiction a 10/10, mainly because it was interesting and had a panicky scenario when me and Katsuro were labeled missing.

[Katsuro]

Oh....

[Katsuro]

Chapter 4 of 'The 99 Nights' was awesome but...since when where you the bad guy, Das....?

[Dasthur]

Chapter 4 of 'The 99 Nights' was awesome but...since when where you the bad guy, Das....?

Since the beginning. Thanks for the awesome.

[wisna]

See you can't kill me! I have good friends.

[Exodius]

I give your newest chapter, Dasthur, a 9.5/10, as always. I liked that you made yourself seem like the villain like a surprise, but it was a tad short.

Now it's my turn for getting rated.

[Dasthur]

I give your newest chapter, Dasthur, a 9.5/10, as always. I liked that you made yourself seem like the villain like a surprise, but it was a tad short.

Now it's my turn for getting rated.

10/10 for you, like last time. I loved it that you put Torshiro in it by surprise. Really got me standing up instead of sitting down.

[Exodius]

Anyway, Das, as for your chapter, I give your chapter an 8.5, considering there were many errors which makes it look rushed, and it was just a little short.

[Dasthur]

A 10/10 for yours, Exodius. Love it that you put Xavion in it, making it mysterious. Can't wait for the next Chapter.

And yeah, I was kinda rushy with my Chapter.

[Exodius]

And by the way, remember my advice to write it out on your notepad and save it should you be busy.

[Katsuro]

10/10 for your story Exodius! And 10/10 for 'The 99 Nights'

[Dai]

10/10 For every story, pure epicness. apart from my one's that's for someone else to rate.

[Solar]

IF i post my FINAL copy of my first chapter here will everyne swear it remains here? i need it to be proof read but i dont want ti leaking...

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